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WAIT WAT

Wait, your story is for real?

Great stuff btw, though the mic quality could have been less "breathy".

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

True.

And yeah, this is an exaggeration of what went down about three weeks ago, lol.

what. the. fuck.

Here's the deal: The animation looks like the artist has been drawing stills all their life. The animator needs to work on his stuff, and help direct the artist as to what frames would work for a full "movement" in the flash. Maybe the animator and artist are the same person, whatever, the point is, is that I like the art style, but work needs to be put into bringing it to life.

Next, the plot/setting. That was the wtf bit mentioned above. It was all so ridiculous, but it seemed to be taken so seriously. Perhaps this was intentional, but I found myself wanting to laugh at a punchline about how ridiculous it all was, and one a few came. Something that can really bring this through (if comedy was your intent) is the voice actors being just a little bit more silly. Plus, the sound was a little scratchy.

All in all, I found it to be a fun piece that I can tell a lot of hard work went into. I look forward to the second episode.

P.S. was that the grandfather at the end? Because if so, you may have wanted to make it more obvious (I wasn't sure). Unless the point is to make people wonder, in which case, A+

tacobuttfish responds:

Thanks! And yes, we have been making comics/mangas our entire lives, and the animation world is still fairly new to everyone here at the team, but with each flash our skills get better at both the program and the understanding of cartoon movement with animation. Soon, it will be perfected! And no, the guy at the end is not the grandfather but I'm glad your piecing things together. Episode 2 will shed the light on this character in all of his glory! Thanks for watching, and yes, we did intend for viewers to ponder who this guy is.

-Taco Buttfish.

Alright, here's the deal

This wasn't a life changing Flash for me. BUT, it was funny, and rather original, and I really REALLY want the director/writer of this to keep at it. I think in the future I could be watching a show written by him. Yes this was my first episode in the series, and now I'm off to watch the rest.

sirjeffofshort responds:

Wow, thanks a lot. It is really comments like this that keep me working as hard as I do. I'm really happy you were able to see potential in our work. I really hope you enjoy(ed) the rest of our series and the future shorts we have to come. Thanks again for your review.

ummm

Well, honestly, I liked it better the first time. What I mean by that, is that you say the original version of this, and simply redid it in the littlest of ways. Even 50% of the pictures were form that other version. That is the "2" on graphics. The Style and Humour were from the punk rock jokes, which were not in the original, and were funny.

overall though, lame-sauce. If you "redo" somehting, make it completly different.

sams11 responds:

I had no idea there was another flash like this in the portal

Esqueeze me?

..ah haha? I guess? You did this for math class? What grade are you in, because it doesn't seem like something that would get you a great score. Speaking of scores, I didn't give it a very good one.

-sessle

freenrich-1 responds:

The teacher was amazed by my work. I am the only one that can do flash well in my class. She is always saying that she cant even understand how to open solitaire on her computer. so she loved this. and another thing esqueeze yourself.

Newgrounds has been a favorite of mine since 2002, even though I lurk mostly. Recently I've decided I could contribute my voice to Flash animators that needed a flexible voice, so I've been uploading samples. Check them out! And don't hesitate to PM me.

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